Wednesday, 10 November 2010

First Draft of Music Magazine

This is my first draft of my front cover of my music magazine.





















This is my first draft of my contents page for my music magazine

















This is my first draft of my double page spread for my music magazine













Shaun Casey
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2 comments:

  1. Miss King/ Mrs Robinson15 November 2010 at 01:58

    I like these Shaun. Now you have your DPS draft back you can get on with your final pages. Well done!
    My only worry is the shots are all very similar. You have to show a range of shot types and styles. You currently have one long shot from a high angle and three medium shots. Very limited range Shaun!
    SK

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  2. Miss King/ Mrs Robinson17 November 2010 at 01:02

    Also look at how many cover stories you have. You need to get rid of the underlining and make the fonts smaller for the secondary stories. Also your pug is too large. Make sure you use puffs and more features on the front page will help you to improve the detail in your contents page.
    SK

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